IELTS Writing Task 1 sering dianggap section yang tricky. Di bagian ini, kamu diminta mendeskripsikan informasi visual seperti grafik, tabel, diagram, atau peta, semuanya secara objektif, ringkas, dan akurat.
Supaya bisa tembus Band 9.0, IELTS Writing Task 1 dinilai dari beberapa aspek penting. Mulai dari Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource, hingga Grammatical Range & Accuracy.
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1️⃣ Sample Questions
The table above shows data on the demographics of four nations.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✅ Contoh Jawaban Essay Band 9.0
The table provides key information about the population, gross domestic product per person and life expectancy in four different countries.
Overall, there are two very noticeable features. Firstly, China has by far the highest number of citizens, but they have the lowest economic output per person out of the four powers. Secondly, the United States has the highest earnings, but the lowest life expectancy.
China has the highest number of people with around 1.3 billion citizens, however, the average person only produces $6,807 and the Chinese average age upon death is 75.2 years. This is in contrast with the USA where people earn, on average, nearly 10 times more than a normal man or woman from China. Despite this, Americans live significantly shorter lives at just 69.2 years.
The United Kingdom has the lowest population of the four countries with just under 65 million, but notably has the second highest GDP and the highest life expectancy with $41,787 and 81.5 years respectively. Russia has a population of nearly 144 million and a relatively low GDP per capita of nearly $15,000.
*Source: IELTS Advantage
2️⃣ Sample Questions
The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for the future. Earnings are in US dollars ($).
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✅ Contoh Jawaban Essay Band 9.0
The bar chart displays the average salary in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years with an estimated value for 2018. The unit of currency is in United States dollars.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that wages consistently increased in every recorded time period, except 2008, when they decreased slightly. Salaries are expected to increase significantly in the future.
Average earnings in 1968 stood at their lowest recorded levels at just under $8,000 and they then increased a decade later to around $10,000 in 1978. This trend continued in 1988 with the average income climbing to approximately $13,000. 10 years later, in 1998, it further improved to its highest recorded value of about $15,000.
The only notable exception to this expansion in levels of pay was 2008 when wages decreased by around $1,000 from the peak of 1998. However, this trend is not expected to continue in the future with projections of over $20,000 forecast for 2018.
*Source: IELTS Advantage
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